James Joyce is known for his rambling on, his multitude of adjectives stacked upon each other; Ernest Hemingway knew how to work a sentence for building pace and tension; but these lines in these are simply run-on sentences. It's the Polish language and its plethora of cases that allow this to happen. I've seen it cross over from Polish into English. While correcting translations for Al, I was always irked by how the sentences never seemed to come to an end, as if she loved the thought so much that she couldn't bear to add a period, instead she'd tack on another clause (without a semi-colon!)
Pinning Identity to Consciousness (Pt I)
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My phone tells me it's raining outside. And yet I see sunshine streaming
through the trees. I go out to empty the cat-litter trays. As I approach
the hed...
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